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From 4a1155c88d295e81037fd8a48b585a00fbf43cbc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Thu, 26 Dec 2013 02:47:44 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] man: improvements to comma placement

This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to:
comma placement.

Conflicts:
	man/sd_bus_message_get_cookie.xml
	man/sd_bus_request_name.xml
	man/sd_session_is_active.xml
	man/sd_watchdog_enabled.xml
	man/systemctl.xml
	man/systemd.exec.xml
	man/systemd.timer.xml
	man/systemd.unit.xml
---
 man/halt.xml                           | 2 +-
 man/hostnamectl.xml                    | 2 +-
 man/sd-daemon.xml                      | 4 ++--
 man/sd-readahead.xml                   | 2 +-
 man/sd_booted.xml                      | 2 +-
 man/sd_get_seats.xml                   | 2 +-
 man/sd_is_fifo.xml                     | 2 +-
 man/sd_listen_fds.xml                  | 2 +-
 man/sd_login_monitor_new.xml           | 6 +++---
 man/sd_notify.xml                      | 2 +-
 man/sd_readahead.xml                   | 2 +-
 man/sd_seat_get_active.xml             | 4 ++--
 man/sd_uid_get_state.xml               | 4 ++--
 man/shutdown.xml                       | 2 +-
 man/systemd-analyze.xml                | 2 +-
 man/systemd-ask-password.xml           | 2 +-
 man/systemd-cat.xml                    | 2 +-
 man/systemd-cgls.xml                   | 2 +-
 man/systemd-cgtop.xml                  | 2 +-
 man/systemd-coredumpctl.xml            | 2 +-
 man/systemd-delta.xml                  | 2 +-
 man/systemd-machine-id-setup.xml       | 2 +-
 man/systemd-notify.xml                 | 2 +-
 man/systemd-tmpfiles.xml               | 2 +-
 man/systemd-tty-ask-password-agent.xml | 2 +-
 man/systemd.device.xml                 | 2 +-
 man/systemd.mount.xml                  | 2 +-
 man/systemd.service.xml                | 2 +-
 man/systemd.special.xml                | 2 +-
 man/systemd.swap.xml                   | 2 +-
 man/systemd.xml                        | 2 +-
 man/telinit.xml                        | 2 +-
 man/timedatectl.xml                    | 2 +-
 33 files changed, 38 insertions(+), 38 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man/halt.xml b/man/halt.xml
index 2a13d3c..f54a864 100644
--- a/man/halt.xml
+++ b/man/halt.xml
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/hostnamectl.xml b/man/hostnamectl.xml
index b39fb55..a0776f5 100644
--- a/man/hostnamectl.xml
+++ b/man/hostnamectl.xml
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/sd-daemon.xml b/man/sd-daemon.xml
index 84c1afa..b48eac9 100644
--- a/man/sd-daemon.xml
+++ b/man/sd-daemon.xml
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_booted</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_is_fifo</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 for more information about the functions
-                implemented. In addition to these functions a couple
+                implemented. In addition to these functions, a couple
                 of logging prefixes are defined as macros:</para>
 
                 <programlisting>#define SD_EMERG   "&lt;0&gt;"  /* system is unusable */
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
                 implementation. See the respective function man pages
                 for details.</para>
 
-                <para>In addition, for details about the algorithms
+                <para>In addition, for details about the algorithms,
                 check the liberally licensed reference implementation
                 sources:
                 <ulink url="http://cgit.freedesktop.org/systemd/systemd/plain/src/libsystemd-daemon/sd-daemon.c"/>
diff --git a/man/sd-readahead.xml b/man/sd-readahead.xml
index f8a0a0b..bcc46b2 100644
--- a/man/sd-readahead.xml
+++ b/man/sd-readahead.xml
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
                 reference implementation. See the respective function
                 man pages for details.</para>
 
-                <para>In addition, for details about the algorithms
+                <para>In addition, for details about the algorithms,
                 check the liberally licensed reference implementation
                 sources:
                 <ulink url="http://cgit.freedesktop.org/systemd/systemd/plain/src/readahead/sd-readahead.c"/>
diff --git a/man/sd_booted.xml b/man/sd_booted.xml
index 6f8cc95..1e38d2a 100644
--- a/man/sd_booted.xml
+++ b/man/sd_booted.xml
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
                 file. Alternatively, applications consuming these APIs
                 may copy the implementation into their source
                 tree. For more details about the reference
-                implementation see
+                implementation, see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd-daemon</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
                 <para>If the reference implementation is used as
diff --git a/man/sd_get_seats.xml b/man/sd_get_seats.xml
index 1e55af3..f0e7655 100644
--- a/man/sd_get_seats.xml
+++ b/man/sd_get_seats.xml
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Return Value</title>
 
-                <para>On success <function>sd_get_seats()</function>,
+                <para>On success, <function>sd_get_seats()</function>,
                 <function>sd_get_sessions()</function>,
                 <function>sd_get_uids()</function> and
                 <function>sd_get_machine_names()</function> return the
diff --git a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
index 5e79453..4bb2236 100644
--- a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
+++ b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@
                 file. Alternatively, applications consuming these APIs
                 may copy the implementation into their source
                 tree. For more details about the reference
-                implementation see
+                implementation, see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd-daemon</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
                 <para>These functions continue to work as described,
diff --git a/man/sd_listen_fds.xml b/man/sd_listen_fds.xml
index aaabdbf..6a9e082 100644
--- a/man/sd_listen_fds.xml
+++ b/man/sd_listen_fds.xml
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
                 file. Alternatively, applications consuming these APIs
                 may copy the implementation into their source
                 tree. For more details about the reference
-                implementation see
+                implementation, see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd-daemon</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
                 <para>If the reference implementation is used as
diff --git a/man/sd_login_monitor_new.xml b/man/sd_login_monitor_new.xml
index f439d3e..14ff241 100644
--- a/man/sd_login_monitor_new.xml
+++ b/man/sd_login_monitor_new.xml
@@ -198,13 +198,13 @@ else {
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Return Value</title>
 
-                <para>On success
+                <para>On success,
                 <function>sd_login_monitor_new()</function>,
                 <function>sd_login_monitor_flush()</function> and
                 <function>sd_login_monitor_get_timeout()</function>
-                return 0 or a positive integer. On success
+                return 0 or a positive integer. On success,
                 <function>sd_login_monitor_get_fd()</function> returns
-                a Unix file descriptor. On success
+                a Unix file descriptor. On success,
                 <function>sd_login_monitor_get_events()</function>
                 returns a combination of <constant>POLLIN</constant>,
                 <constant>POLLOUT</constant> and suchlike. On failure,
diff --git a/man/sd_notify.xml b/man/sd_notify.xml
index e078140..aae27a8 100644
--- a/man/sd_notify.xml
+++ b/man/sd_notify.xml
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@
                 <constant>libsystemd-daemon</constant> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 file. Alternatively, applications consuming these APIs
                 may copy the implementation into their source tree. For
-                more details about the reference implementation see
+                more details about the reference implementation, see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd-daemon</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
                 <para>If the reference implementation is used as
diff --git a/man/sd_readahead.xml b/man/sd_readahead.xml
index bb01bcf..9827299 100644
--- a/man/sd_readahead.xml
+++ b/man/sd_readahead.xml
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
                 <filename>sd-readahead.h</filename> files. It is
                 recommended that applications consuming this API copy
                 the implementation into their source tree. For more
-                details about the reference implementation see
+                details about the reference implementation, see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd-readahead</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry></para>
 
                 <para>If -DDISABLE_SYSTEMD is set during compilation,
diff --git a/man/sd_seat_get_active.xml b/man/sd_seat_get_active.xml
index 23d582d..c64ba13 100644
--- a/man/sd_seat_get_active.xml
+++ b/man/sd_seat_get_active.xml
@@ -143,9 +143,9 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Return Value</title>
 
-                <para> On success
+                <para> On success,
                 <function>sd_seat_get_active()</function>
-                returns 0 or a positive integer. On success
+                returns 0 or a positive integer. On success,
                 <function>sd_seat_get_sessions()</function> returns
                 the number of entries in the session identifier
                 array. If the test succeeds,
diff --git a/man/sd_uid_get_state.xml b/man/sd_uid_get_state.xml
index 0faa765..30b254c 100644
--- a/man/sd_uid_get_state.xml
+++ b/man/sd_uid_get_state.xml
@@ -152,11 +152,11 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Return Value</title>
 
-                <para>On success
+                <para>On success,
                 <function>sd_uid_get_state()</function> returns 0 or a
                 positive integer. If the test succeeds,
                 <function>sd_uid_is_on_seat()</function> returns a
-                positive integer, if it fails
+                positive integer; if it fails,
                 0. <function>sd_uid_get_sessions()</function> and
                 <function>sd_uid_get_seats()</function> return the
                 number of entries in the returned arrays. On failure,
diff --git a/man/shutdown.xml b/man/shutdown.xml
index 795fb66..27e7e87 100644
--- a/man/shutdown.xml
+++ b/man/shutdown.xml
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/systemd-analyze.xml b/man/systemd-analyze.xml
index aefbfc8..b7753f9 100644
--- a/man/systemd-analyze.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-analyze.xml
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/systemd-ask-password.xml b/man/systemd-ask-password.xml
index 8af328d..79902cb 100644
--- a/man/systemd-ask-password.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-ask-password.xml
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/systemd-cat.xml b/man/systemd-cat.xml
index ffb1dfd..ba7a2cf 100644
--- a/man/systemd-cat.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-cat.xml
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/systemd-cgls.xml b/man/systemd-cgls.xml
index 432706b..152b883 100644
--- a/man/systemd-cgls.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-cgls.xml
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/systemd-cgtop.xml b/man/systemd-cgtop.xml
index 7faedfb..0e1f7c5 100644
--- a/man/systemd-cgtop.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-cgtop.xml
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/systemd-coredumpctl.xml b/man/systemd-coredumpctl.xml
index 9ccb67d..67f75d1 100644
--- a/man/systemd-coredumpctl.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-coredumpctl.xml
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@
 
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise. Not finding any matching coredumps is treated
                 as failure.
                 </para>
diff --git a/man/systemd-delta.xml b/man/systemd-delta.xml
index 4d3ab78..ebaa349 100644
--- a/man/systemd-delta.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-delta.xml
@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/systemd-machine-id-setup.xml b/man/systemd-machine-id-setup.xml
index bc38d55..7b3aa7e 100644
--- a/man/systemd-machine-id-setup.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-machine-id-setup.xml
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/systemd-notify.xml b/man/systemd-notify.xml
index a769346..e14977d 100644
--- a/man/systemd-notify.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-notify.xml
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/systemd-tmpfiles.xml b/man/systemd-tmpfiles.xml
index 495247e..c678031 100644
--- a/man/systemd-tmpfiles.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-tmpfiles.xml
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/systemd-tty-ask-password-agent.xml b/man/systemd-tty-ask-password-agent.xml
index 31a18ba..cb5fb43 100644
--- a/man/systemd-tty-ask-password-agent.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-tty-ask-password-agent.xml
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/systemd.device.xml b/man/systemd.device.xml
index 002b647..586473c 100644
--- a/man/systemd.device.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.device.xml
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
                 udev tag (by default all block and network devices,
                 and a few others). This may be used to define
                 dependencies between devices and other units. To tag a
-                udev device use <literal>TAG+="systemd"</literal> in
+                udev device, use <literal>TAG+="systemd"</literal> in
                 the udev rules file, see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>udev</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 for details.</para>
diff --git a/man/systemd.mount.xml b/man/systemd.mount.xml
index df5a79e..6f9f70c 100644
--- a/man/systemd.mount.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.mount.xml
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
                 in a unit file
                 <filename>home-lennart.mount</filename>. For details
                 about the escaping logic used to convert a file system
-                path to a unit name see
+                path to a unit name, see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.unit</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
                 <para>Optionally, a mount unit may be accompanied by
diff --git a/man/systemd.service.xml b/man/systemd.service.xml
index 80a935d..e869f95 100644
--- a/man/systemd.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.service.xml
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@
                                 <literal>one</literal> and
                                 <literal>two two</literal>,
                                 respectively. Since two commands are
-                                specified
+                                specified,
                                 <varname>Type=oneshot</varname> must
                                 be used.</para>
 
diff --git a/man/systemd.special.xml b/man/systemd.special.xml
index 863a029..76bb5cd 100644
--- a/man/systemd.special.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.special.xml
@@ -996,7 +996,7 @@
                 <filename>smartcard.target</filename>,
                 <filename>sound.target</filename>.</para>
 
-                <para>In addition the following special unit is
+                <para>In addition, the following special unit is
                 understood only when systemd runs as service instance:</para>
 
                 <variablelist>
diff --git a/man/systemd.swap.xml b/man/systemd.swap.xml
index 13f6c84..5e8b25f 100644
--- a/man/systemd.swap.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.swap.xml
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
                 <filename noindex='true'>/dev/sda5</filename> must be configured in a
                 unit file <filename>dev-sda5.swap</filename>. For
                 details about the escaping logic used to convert a
-                file system path to a unit name see
+                file system path to a unit name, see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.unit</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
                 <para>All swap units automatically get the appropriate
diff --git a/man/systemd.xml b/man/systemd.xml
index 85c06d3..23a0c26 100644
--- a/man/systemd.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.xml
@@ -494,7 +494,7 @@
                 <filename>/proc</filename>.</para>
 
                 <para>For more information about the concepts and
-                ideas behind systemd please refer to the <ulink
+                ideas behind systemd, please refer to the <ulink
                 url="http://0pointer.de/blog/projects/systemd.html">Original
                 Design Document</ulink>.</para>
 
diff --git a/man/telinit.xml b/man/telinit.xml
index bb80939..b20a60a 100644
--- a/man/telinit.xml
+++ b/man/telinit.xml
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
diff --git a/man/timedatectl.xml b/man/timedatectl.xml
index be0ad3f..f4975ce 100644
--- a/man/timedatectl.xml
+++ b/man/timedatectl.xml
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>